Innate talent is like a river
It will just flow freely
From the mind
Through the veins
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It is so nice and powerful poem, I am agree with you completely, but don't forget only for the talented poet things are smooth like that, as you are one of them, because you know how it is working, which you have explained in your marvellous poem..
It will just flow freely from the spirit......... ................ To the pen and paper.
So well expressed! The kind of Poetry You can't, And should not Forget!
I cite you here, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, innate talent is like a river It will just flow freely From the mind Through the veins To the heart and soul.....................I love this metaphored poem, full of Brilliance, mesmerizing poem, you conjured magic here, my dear. A true inspiring brevity..Each time, this poem has qan very inspiring appeal to me It has to do with the poetic and the artistic.......very impressing poetry, it has trickled my thoughts in a way. Thank YOU! .
I like your trickles of thought. Beautifully written and containing some very nice wisdom.
Such people are naturally gifted Rose...I do agree it's a pleasure to enjoy their contributions...of course this poem too is one from such a gifted poetess...thanks and God bless you
Innate talent is a gift of nature, if it finds a of opportunity it falls from mountains and ends in a sea like a river. Sometimes Rose Marie Juan Austin has this natural talent, that remained confined in a lake and when the lake was overfilled it found a to conquer he plains. She is a conquering poetess/ I wish her more success!
I like very much the use of the metaphors here. You excel in brilliance, Mrs. Juan-Austin and how. I have come back to reread this poem because of its perfect beauty. Perfection does only need that tad difference and this poem has that. Once again thank you so much for sharing,
the innate intelligence yeah; like the river flowing naturally, incessantly in comes.............and touches eternity!
Innate talent! ! ! Flows! Through the veins; Muse of Creativity. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I checked this page for 'A Trickle of Thought-2'. No luck.
To the heart and soul.......wonderful poem. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
Innate talent is like a river/It will just flow freely.....................I sincerely admire the sanctity of this great expression! A brilliant poem.................................................10
We wait for more such beautiful thoughts. With our fingers crossed
Hi Rose Marie, A profound piece of art. It is our innate qualities that make us. Or break us too. The talent, the specialness, the Uniqueness with which we are born manifest in all our acts, deeds and speeches. All our aesthetic contributions. Marvellously expressed. Congratulations.
4) Reading your excellent poem, makes me instantly awake. Truly awake and had the wish to read this time and again so oft as able. Since I am a paintress first, I see so many many paintings more in poems, especiially in this one. God´s Rich Blessings for you and your beloved family, Mrs.Juan-Austin. UP ToMyPoemList.
3) You have used our own body as a metaphor for your poem, that is very special. You started with River, and then our mind, our veins (exactly like that river, there is liquid) and the rest heart and soul. It just touches me so much! Again and again. This is really brilliance at its best, I must admit.
another masterpiece deserves 10/10 and onto my fave list. Well done and thanks for sharing with us all your gemstone shapes poems