Monday, August 5, 2019

A Trickle Of Thought -1 Comments

Rating: 4.9

Innate talent is like a river
It will just flow freely
From the mind
Through the veins
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Soran M. H 21 August 2020

another masterpiece deserves 10/10 and onto my fave list. Well done and thanks for sharing with us all your gemstone shapes poems

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Soran M. H 21 August 2020

It is so nice and powerful poem, I am agree with you completely, but don't forget only for the talented poet things are smooth like that, as you are one of them, because you know how it is working, which you have explained in your marvellous poem..

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Soran M. H 21 August 2020

It will just flow freely from the spirit......... ................ To the pen and paper.

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Sandra Feldman 23 July 2020

So well expressed! The kind of Poetry You can't, And should not Forget!

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Kesav Easwaran 16 March 2020

Yes, indeed. Very well said, Rose Marie 10+

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

I cite you here, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, innate talent is like a river It will just flow freely From the mind Through the veins To the heart and soul.....................I love this metaphored poem, full of Brilliance, mesmerizing poem, you conjured magic here, my dear. A true inspiring brevity..Each time, this poem has qan very inspiring appeal to me It has to do with the poetic and the artistic.......very impressing poetry, it has trickled my thoughts in a way. Thank YOU! .

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Hans Vr 11 September 2019

I like your trickles of thought. Beautifully written and containing some very nice wisdom.

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Indira Renganathan 03 September 2019

Such people are naturally gifted Rose...I do agree it's a pleasure to enjoy their contributions...of course this poem too is one from such a gifted poetess...thanks and God bless you

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Akhtar Jawad 29 August 2019

Innate talent is a gift of nature, if it finds a of opportunity it falls from mountains and ends in a sea like a river. Sometimes Rose Marie Juan Austin has this natural talent, that remained confined in a lake and when the lake was overfilled it found a to conquer he plains. She is a conquering poetess/ I wish her more success!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2019

I like very much the use of the metaphors here. You excel in brilliance, Mrs. Juan-Austin and how. I have come back to reread this poem because of its perfect beauty. Perfection does only need that tad difference and this poem has that. Once again thank you so much for sharing,

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 August 2019

the innate intelligence yeah; like the river flowing naturally, incessantly in comes.............and touches eternity!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2019

Innate talent! ! ! Flows! Through the veins; Muse of Creativity. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 August 2019

I checked this page for 'A Trickle of Thought-2'. No luck.

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Rini shibu 05 August 2019

Beautiful poem on innate talent

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Anjandev Roy 05 August 2019

To the heart and soul.......wonderful poem. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 August 2019

Innate talent is like a river/It will just flow freely.....................I sincerely admire the sanctity of this great expression! A brilliant poem.................................................10

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 August 2019

We wait for more such beautiful thoughts. With our fingers crossed

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 August 2019

Hi Rose Marie, A profound piece of art. It is our innate qualities that make us. Or break us too. The talent, the specialness, the Uniqueness with which we are born manifest in all our acts, deeds and speeches. All our aesthetic contributions. Marvellously expressed. Congratulations.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2019

4) Reading your excellent poem, makes me instantly awake. Truly awake and had the wish to read this time and again so oft as able. Since I am a paintress first, I see so many many paintings more in poems, especiially in this one. God´s Rich Blessings for you and your beloved family, Mrs.Juan-Austin. UP ToMyPoemList.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2019

3) You have used our own body as a metaphor for your poem, that is very special. You started with River, and then our mind, our veins (exactly like that river, there is liquid) and the rest heart and soul. It just touches me so much! Again and again. This is really brilliance at its best, I must admit.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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