A TRIBAL WOMAN TO HER
LOVER
Take me to the village fun-fair my love,
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Very melodious and beautiful poem reflecting innocent feelings of love. Regards Naseer
How nice it would have been.... If all women could ask their lover To buy a pair of Jhumka... Instead of XXXXXX..... And all lovers.. ready to offer! ! Simplistic way of live Wonderful sway of Love. A lot ot learn.. Men and Women... Just enjoy buying Jhumka Just enroll wearing the Jhumka... Dear Poet, The Tale of this Love and Jhumka... Let it be read by many and many... May tender love prevail everywhere. Lovely....
A woman's plea to her loving half wing...Brilliance in rhymes and rhythm, beautiful imagery used...you have swayed me into your melodious poem.10+++
Raj, this is every woman's plea to her beloved. you have captured the vivacity, romance, with beautiful images.just as there is magic in spring, so it is here in this melodious song. i am totally enraptured, just back from my walk in the park, celebrating winter,10 Mamta
The true love demands very little, in simplicty it laughs, thrives in gifts of nature like flowers, here kit is Palash and very simple jhumka. The tribal woman here asks for no more, she wanst to give much more. The Poem has captured it very well, behind the flutes of melody. Great Poem.10