Thursday, April 25, 2013

A Tribal Girl Comments

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A beaming ray from one eye
The other behind an awning, smile
Wishes, desires born and die
And upon their graves falls a tear
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Yasmin Khan
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Ramesh Rai 01 August 2013

since long tribals are ever neglected. so many changes happened but they r untouched.so far uplifting is concerned missions have done a little in the name of religion.provoking write

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Hans Vr 03 May 2013

How complete, the description, beauty, virtue and vice, parts of life Very nice poem

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Wahab Abdul 01 May 2013

aptly describe a tribal girl, rhyme is the enemy of a poem but sometimes its a quality, too

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 April 2013

this is the sad life of a tribal girl.nicely written.liked it.keep inking jasmeen.

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Shahzia Batool 25 April 2013

...as if you have seen a tribal girl closely: She moves and walks in a born fear i've never got a chance to see a tribal girl that closely just like this your character... with beauty and with fears, she is well-portrayed! ! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 April 2013

Soulful representation.Every tribal girl has her own way of life from frontier provinces of Pakistan to Central Asia bethey Pakhtun, Tajik, Khazar, Mongol or whatsoever, they are beautiful all within their boundaries, her crime could be pre-marital affairs what are not tolerated in lately predominant islamic societies.That way its true many Pashtuns do not enjoy the Bliss of westernized Turks.Inquisitive and substantiated well.

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