You can not escape
from the mechanism of
my thought process
until my feelings are finished
...
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such a touching piece....can touch everyone's heart...enough to make my thoughts drift afar...wandering across the great ocean...following the words I'm reading....in reality it would really bring sadness.....oceans apart...miles away...so sad.... but worth a smile...
This summer I spent only a few days on the beach and, sure, an arabian sea side is exotic and mysterious. So one can spend some thoughts about this issue of the beaches. Somebody else already wrote about their affective meaning but I'd add only one thing. From the beaches wish can reach everybody everywhere. More than from the airports.
Nice poem Sarwar Great write! ! ! ! ! ! I like this: 'But we know the tremendous fact- we have not seen each other just sharing thoughts from remote has created fusion'. Hope this fusion will be for keeps
unusual yet breathtaking the way you write! yet again...im mesmerised. I love the First verse the most. A treat for the Romantics!
Lovely heartfelt poem Sarwar, I enjoyed reading it, thanks 10 Lynda xx
Distant love can be as beautiful and strong as this face to face one, very nice poem
WOW! Lovely Sarwar.. you wouldn't think its completely imaginary.. great job.
love accross the seas... well expressed..... keep writing... :)
Exuding and stemming love galore. Great write. Remote comes near // to ‘promise-promote’ // and purport. Ten++ dr. sakti. Thanks for comments and rating expecting same on my poems if you please.