Tuesday, January 13, 2015

A Tree Perspective Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've seen you in this barren space
Standing majestically tall,
I've gazed upon your elegance,
From winter through to fall.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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KingKong 16 November 2017

I loved it so much I also recited it too

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KingKong 16 November 2017

Best poem yet

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2015

Oh! What a great composition it is. So wisely and nicely depicted about the perspective of a tree. The favourite lines are..... I'm glad I came to this spot And spent this time with you. ...... How foolish I was to assume You were just a lonely tree. Many many thanks dear Loyd C, may God increase your poetic imaginatin.

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Richard Netherland Cook 27 April 2015

Really enjoyed. My kind of poem written with imagination. Richard Netherland Cook

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Lyn Paul 05 February 2015

So meaningful especially with your notes and picture too. Thank You Loyd. Congratulations too on your book.

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Valsa George 16 January 2015

Music plays through my limbs When tickled by the breeze; Crickets and jar-flies serenade Nature's song in melodious ease......... Love these lines! Nature teaches us many valuable lessons. The lone tree never feels that it is lonely.... it sees many companions around! Man makes fuss over many things.... Even in a crowd, he is lonely! How happy we would be if we could develop the tree's perspective! A beautiful poem!

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Elisha Wall 14 January 2015

Insightful poem! It reminded me of Love's Philosphy by Percy Shelley...'Nothing in the world is single; All things by a law divine'. Thanks!

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Lawerence Mize 13 January 2015

Very nice poem. I liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing.

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Lorraine Colon 13 January 2015

What a lovely poem. To look at life from a tree's perspective is quite amusing. No need to feel sorry for the tree - it has ample company. I just loved reading this, Loyd.

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