Sunday, March 1, 2009

A Tree On The Other Side Of The Road Comments

Rating: 4.2

A tree on the other side of the road
Big and branched
Green shining leafs
Shade stretch every where
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Mohammed AlBalushi
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 30 July 2013

good imagery with deep meaning really enjoyed thanks for sharing

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Danny Draper 29 February 2012

A nice figurative piece, thanks for sharing. You are a poet and as with all of us it is a journey of learning and developing our skills. Keep going.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

nice figurative.... loved it!

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Indira Renganathan 13 September 2009

Seasoned seasonal poem...lovely

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Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

As you know I love nature and the way you have related the seasons through your tree is supurb congratulatios 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2009

Every one back A tree on the other side of the road... beautiful write on other side of the road... it drawn my attention well to the theme..well done dear sir.....10 there is only seasonal change rest it stands alone inmidst of life.... read mine you go alone.......simple grace...miss i miss u

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Chitra - 12 August 2009

a nice metaphor of life and its various seasons!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 August 2009

This poem made me see the poem!

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 01 August 2009

Great imagination and charisma!

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Surya . 21 July 2009

a wonderful poem in season. has a deep meaning on life too. voted10 surya

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Nooruddeen Mm 23 June 2009

Hi Dear You have described all the seasons in a few lines in a beautiful manner. The way of your presentation is excellent and of course the title, The Tree on ……., that withstand whole the seasons, attracts more. Good work. Thank you for sharing Noor

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Angelic(Annie) Female 09 May 2009

Nice poem here- must come to visit you often :)

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Pablo Cruise 06 April 2009

Capturing the seasons through the branches of a tree. Very lovely, Mohammed

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Marvin Brato 10 March 2009

M agic spell o ften is created h appens in simplicity a fter a poem is read m oving with simplicity m akes a poetry a dorable to comprehend e ven it tells about simple things d escribed in simple ways

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Marvin Brato 10 March 2009

M agic spell o ften is created h appens in simplicity a fter a poem is read m oving with simplicity m akes a poetry a dorable to comprehend e ven it tells about simple things d

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Eyan Desir 09 March 2009

I like the flow and it was so simple good write

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 March 2009

A good write here. the tree witnesses everything that's happening around...always willing to 'give' whatever it has and never asking anything in return...Thanks for sharing

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2009

A natural landmark that witnessed many history, thats the tree!

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 March 2009

This tree is what we all need; and, it is about life.Thanks for sharing it with us. Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Vinod Kumar 02 March 2009

yes the tree is still there, alone excet it`s soul and feelings, ans it knews the canges of the surroundings and the feel its change sharing with unknown several friends, the tiny creaters like ant and birds and little paracites ans the wind ete, but we cant understand too much, thanks for showing the beautiful peaceful sacred tree, gave all good things to all, thanks a lot,10++++++

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