Sunday, May 15, 2016

A Tree Of Flowers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pretty was the first tremor of romance
In the wild wind my drunken dance,
Dreaming with stars in the maiden moonlight,
Attracting the lovers in the sexy sunlight,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Konab Ghumman 13 March 2019

I'm a beautiful agent of immortal love, A teacher for man and lion and dove, Beauty is in you that a flower unlocks, To see your shocks and the aftershocks, . Unique masterpiece.

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A great poem that captures the beauty and wonders of nature. ' I rose again from the bosom of earth, Now a tree of flowers, my beauty my worth. '..lovely lines from a beautiful poem.10

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

Liked the 'embryos line' especially. And the rhyming. Metals? ? :) bri

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Loke Kok Yee 16 May 2016

known are the ways of nature a tiny seed brings great pleasure Thank you sir-10

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Kelly Kurt 16 May 2016

'Beauty is in you that a flower unlocks' Perhaps the best line I have read in a long time

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