A Tree In Thought Of His Mother Comments

Favorite lines: “even the strongest gale must uproot her first before it could pick the flower young” but my computer and my ‘brain’ tell me there is something wrong with a word here: “and when everones gay, in the season spring” ………….everyone’s/everyone is …….? :) :) I think “his” flowers did not bloom because “he” had no flowers. I do think some trees do not produce flowers or fruit. some are definitely called male and female. maybe the females should wear saris/dresses so you and I can tell the difference? bri :)

.......dear kanav :) this special tribute poem is one of the best tribute poems, I have ever read...if not the best....and it is definitely one of the most special poems you have ever written with your magical ink :) ....so easily you penned it so beautifully...and I know it comes straight from your heart.....I love it :)

As children grow up they under the pressure of their peer group sometimes strays away from their parents thought they hold them firmly at heart. An excellent poem and loved reading it.

This is a lovely, thought-provoking poem.

veryyyyyyyyy beautiful as well as emotional tribute to maaaa.....! beautifully written with great technique of metaphor... wonderful..100 on 10, ..

i'll send Kanav a message about this one. thanks for sharing. ;) bri

Kanav ji, excellent the poem is perfect tribute, to mother. You convey your feeling clearly. The use of metaphor makes the poem attractive. Such poems as yours are more relavent in android age. Thanks for creating such a poem.

Beautiful flow of words from your pen. She protects him from vultures old, severe heat and cold. Yes, very true said. she cover her child with blanket of warmth protection. Who else can do? When flower had bloomed into tree, he longs for her grace. Very true said...Wonders that tree in an empty room.........I loved each lines.. Loved this poem very much Kanav.

Kanav, magnificent poem. Poems written on mother charms me. Your poem is as equal to the poem of kamala Dass which i read months ago. You imagination is very rich. THANKS Again. Jooking forward to more poems

Wonderful imagery! Most heartfelt bittersweet emotion... I am so very delighted to become acquainted with your pen. Touché Sir Poet!

Just as always, great work! ! ! : D

Once a blooming flower tells its tale it will have the same fragrance. 'The Tree in Thought' has many saplings and this tale will be told to many and many. A poem that made me nostalgic...

A beautiful tribute to your mother Kanav, and excellent use of metaphor. Well done.

very very touching! i can relate this with my mom & i will definitely do all this for my daughter too...... nice poem Kanav, i will vote 10 for this :)

A very touching poem and a full 10/10.

Hello Kanav this poem is beautiful your flowers are definitely blooming here.You have a great way with words which you use to paint beautiful picture

Your heart is golden Kanav. Such beautiful words another reason to make Your Mother so proud

..........it touched, Kanav! : (((

Your true expressions read like confessions...your mother must have been surely proud, of your talent, .and the beautiful way in which you set it alight....I will continue exploring your penned pieces, with great enjoyment and anticipation. PEACE

A very touching poem, beautifully expressed..