Wednesday, August 3, 2016

A Tree In Autumn Comments

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Who cares for the flowers' gone grandeur?
Who reads the story of the falling leaves?
What to steal from one heading to a winter,
In autumn you invite the beautiful thieves!
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Konab Ghumman 13 March 2019

A nicely knitted poem...Love to read it....

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 August 2016

No wonder the Autumn Breeze is gently flowing to Winter. Life keeps on moving through all the seasons of the years. Yet Autumn Breeze has something to whisper. Dear poet I can listen to the Autumn whisper. Loved reading it. Beautiful write and I love Autumn! !

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Valsa George 04 August 2016

The transition from summer to autumn and then to winter is beautifully described! The butterflies and birds that have disappeared with winter will once more come back in Spring and life goes on and on!

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2016

The miniscule details covered in your poem amuses at times. Awesome poem...10++++

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Loke Kok Yee 03 August 2016

you have made autumn so pretty! thank you sir-10

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 August 2016

A nice description a well wrote poem.

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Kelly Kurt 03 August 2016

Although autumn (at least the first half) is beautiful, and summer is now so hot and humid; I am not yet ready for the transition

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Rajnish Manga 03 August 2016

I am impressed by your factual and actual interpretation of the seasonal impact.

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