Monday, January 9, 2012

A Tree In A Barren Soil Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm a tree in a barren soil,
Shedding its leaves as tears
I cannot grow more here,
Under the scorching hatredness
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Saadat Tahir 14 January 2012

touching and painful litany of expatriate life great lines :) cheers

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Ency Bearis 14 January 2012

good poem, nicely written

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Subodh Pandey 10 January 2012

nicely portrayed poem. a beautiful read rose.

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Sajna Kailas 10 January 2012

very well written Rose, as a fine Rose in fresh bloom! ! ! keep it up! !

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Vipins Puthooran 10 January 2012

It's a beautifulllll poem, , , , , showing the deep sadness of your life! ! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 09 January 2012

A really beautiful poem, really liked it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, A Window Of Time 3.

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