Tuesday, December 16, 2008

A Tree (First Poem Written - Age 8) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, how lovely is a tree
so much taller, than you or me.
Spreading out it's branches day and night
for tired birds, from their flight.
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele
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Indira Renganathan 06 June 2009

Yes, yes...provoking one's mind to ponder10+++

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Martin Swords 02 February 2009

You certainly did, and do, Cheryl.Ask any Robin!

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Pregnant with the promise that was not aborted.

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Muhammad Shanazar 30 December 2008

Nice poem, tree is a symbol of shelter our role in the world must be like the role of a tree, it is the only way we can save humanity from the scorching heat. Please read my poem 'On The Tree'. Love and respects Muhammad Shanazar

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 28 December 2008

You are great! You indeed show your poetic ability and talents at this tender age!

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Mohammad Ilyas 20 December 2008

Madam Cheryl Lynn! I do not believe that you have written the poem in the age of eight. And if you did it then you are a born poet. Amazing. Really. Happy to see you from Aries class.

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Marilyn Lott 20 December 2008

Why yes, Cheryl, I think you DID show promise. I remember my first poem about Daffodils and I don't think I want to add it to my collection. But, it is in us, isn't it, from a young age? Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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C.R. Clark 18 December 2008

Well done! A lovely poem indeed, especially when penned by one so young. I do think the literary talent shows through. (But then, I am regularly amazed at the natural talent of many young poets on this site) Thanks for sharing. Richard

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele

Cheryl Lynn Moyer Peele

Montgomery, AL
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