A tree can't sing;
They say mice go 'squeak'
And fish go 'sploosh'
But a tree is renowned for
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It's teeth of dead bark.... That is my favourite line. I love the whole poem. It's very good, sort of melancholy as you first taste it. Then you relate... and by you I mean me. Very very well writen but I feel the chocolate brown line detracts from the poem by taking away from the image presented. That's just my opinion. Anyway, great job!
Terrific poem!