Thursday, November 14, 2013

A Tree Comments

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Chaos in the clouds
My interest
silence dawned my mind
near lost under dreaded majesty
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Robin Strand
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Paul Brookes 16 November 2013

A great poem in the stream of consciousness mode I really get it 10/10 BB : O/

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2013

sorry, i am lost. this tree is too much for me to understand. but i'll look at poem #2. thanks for sharing. :)

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Robin Strand 14 November 2013

Thank you for the critical word ;)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2013

well written poem with slight refinement is in need theme taken itself is symbolic thank

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