A Tree Comments

Fine symbolic expressions! 10+

Dear lovely written It is same to human life as well regards Sandhya

lovely.. symbolically you narrated it... everbody is behind the winner.. loser is always alone... Jaleel

facets of human nature symbolized through a tree...i've one on tree in my 'art og living' series...

Priyanka, An excellent poem from your pen. You have correctly used tree as a metaphor to symbolize a human being. Yes, when a person is useful all will flock near him/her. Once, he/she is out of resources/grace all will desert him/her. Again, when they find that (s) he is once again useful, they will again approach her/him. A tree not just gives shade, it also feeds the people with its fruit. A kind human being feeds and helps his fellow human beings from his bounty of wealth. A tree also gives fire wood. Like fire wood a human being also helps others to glow, by sacrifsing his needs. Any tree should serve these 3 purposes. A tree which does not serve these three purposes is useless, like the Acasia and Eucalyptus trees planted in social forestry by government departments. Very nice poem. I also thank you for visiting my Orkut profile. I also visited your profile in turn. God bless you.

Spring is here! ! now new leaves going to bloom again, the tree shall smile again, its friends will approach it. Great piece of seasonal change of a tree with excellent emotions.

This is a lovely write Priyanka...great images...10++++

Such a beautiful composition about nature esp.a tree... nice enjoyable read!

a bitter truth of life expressed wonderfully. thank you.

A nice poem, the friends want to play once again, is a good thing but tree should know that they are not friends to rely upon. A beautiful reminder that lirfe is cycles and ever changing reality.

I like the comparison that you make between the human being and the tree. The seasons here are the years that mark the passage through life, until the time of death.well written poem..10++++

the poem conveys this whole delight of life as depicted through the tree...Lovely...

Recycle to every one begins..... certainly true ....... your depiction is so beautiful........ see my 10++

Resurrected green tourism.....good poem

You describe nature scenes amazingly thanks to your poetic talent.A very delicate poem, thanks for sharing and keep on! Best wishes. A.

nice flow and deep meaning. u write very well. I invite you to read my poem titled “Markets’ kick” and “Let her not sacrifice anymore”. Would be grateful to receive your valuable feedback. Rgds Nikunj

Butified by its leaves, so green and serene, everyone loves it, the matured tree. ....Thru the changes in a tree...you made me explore the cycle of life...wonderful thought process...10++ - Brishti....

a cycle it goes through...interesting humans attitude towards it

good, especialy the second para. shan

priyanka beautifully said the sunflower thing well written...great content cheers