Wednesday, April 16, 2008

A Tree Comments

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A tree so tender,
So loving and kind
Help it to survive,
This cold winter drift.
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Brianna Wilshusen
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Ben Gieske 24 October 2008

Vividly portrayed with conversation and personification. You invite the reader to participate and in your own way identify with its predicament as well as that of many people. No one likes to be left behind except for very good reasons.

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

well thought and written..........keep it up! !

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