Wednesday, November 3, 2021

A Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here came the early morning breeze,
Exposed life started with its first sneeze,
The bud opened its soft pink petals,
In a garden of smokes and hard metals,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bharati Nayak 13 December 2021

What else, the life's unparalleled charm of charms? A carefree sleep in in a mother's armored arms! ---Wow--What a beautiful poem!

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Aarzoo Mehek 10 December 2021

Mother's love is the ultimate balm to the child's growth. May all the mothers live in eternal peace and joys. Very touchy poem

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Ruby Mostazir 04 November 2021

What a wonderful piece of poetry....loved it completely

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 November 2021

It's fabulous poetry sir! Thanks for sharing....5 stars

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 November 2021

A beautiful poem, Sir Akhtar! Meaningful message embellished with great metaphors and compelling imagery. Liked the beautiful picture attached to this marvelous write.

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