A Treasure Trove Comments

Jasmine, you are blessed with valuable treasue still remaining in heart, even after loosing some painful ones. Keep the valuable ones safely, which will bright your life... Beautiful poem and well expressed.. Loved reading it.

Head to toe you decorated with diction, imagery.....frm note in fact you dived into the deep ocean to fetch corals and pearls and the beauty of underwater which we can't see..A Treasure Trove treasure available within us yet we don't know who is the owner..we need eyes to push back and see within /priceless keepsakes..Allah has given life and his colour but we put our own and and forget.....A beautiful poem rather a torch to see into the darkness

Thank you Sir Dinesh, same to you. Stay blessed.

A beautiful write indeed Yasmeen! You have excellent hold over diction and the use of the poetic devices has been wondeful. Happy Independence Day too Ms Yasmeen that you are too celebrating across the border.