Tuesday, October 18, 2016

A Treasure In My Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

The scutcheon on my door
Is your peaceful heavenly smile
I carved it on my door
To lock the sorrows inside.
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Bisy Untan
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A poetic magic.. fascinating

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Chinedu Dike 21 December 2019

An insightful piece of poetry written from the conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, madam.

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 March 2019

Wonderful and inspiring Beautiful and blooming Skilful creation. My congrats... ADD MY TEN PLUS

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Bisy Untan 02 March 2019

Thank you for the blessings.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

wonderful expression - Through the spectacles on your nose Don't speck on my rose// yeah -its not possible to share our feelings with everybody

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Bisy Untan 01 March 2019

Sometimes, it becomes impossible when words fail before the strong rush in the mind.

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Indira Renganathan 22 October 2018

Your note says the truth...but whatever you have expressed here carries a complete wholesomeness of love...a splendid work....100

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Bisy Untan 22 October 2018

Thank you mam for you kind inspiring comment.

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A Compelling and captivation composition! Well done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 February 2018

I plead you, not to ask for the key, As I missed it on a thespian escape! The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific....sparkling expression! It's my pleasure reading it again and again!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 October 2017

The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific. -Fascinating..I enjoyed your poem

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Bisy Untan 28 October 2017

Thank You Dr.Dillip for your kind encouragement.

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Dev Anand 31 May 2017

your peaceful heavenly smile To lock the sorrows inside. I carved it on the door of my heart. A treasure to the sanctum of my soul! very nice poem very beautiful poetica expressions of inner feelings..sad memories, desire to be one with the joy itself. but..... thankyou for this beautiful poem.. liked it very much dear poetess. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 May 2017

your peaceful heavenly smile To lock the sorrows inside. I carved it on the door of my heart. A treasure to the sanctum of my soul! very beautiful poetica expressions of inner feelings..sad memories, desire to be one with the joy itself. but..... thankyou for this beautiful poem.. liked it very much dear poetess. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2016

Peacefully. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kee Thampi 30 October 2016

when we write from the heart, it may fly beyond the soul to poem As I missed it on a thespian escape! The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific.

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Bisy Untan 05 November 2016

I'm happy to read your comment. Thank you.

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Mantu Mahakul 29 October 2016

Keeping sorrows inside in locked condition is wise definitely. Spectacular sight is amazing definitely. Very amazingly drafted this poem is.10

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Bisy Untan 29 October 2016

Thank you Mantua Mahakul.

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Valsa George 28 October 2016

I do agree with Rajendran ji! The poem keeps communicating, and its meaning is never exhausted!

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Bisy Untan 28 October 2016

Thank you madam, let it be a Treasure in my soul!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 October 2016

I don't claim I understood your poem. Yet, I am left with a very wonderful feel. That I think is the mark of good poetry. Thanks. (10)

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Bisy Untan 23 October 2016

Thank you Sir.These lines are the expression of a personal experience of my life.

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