The scutcheon on my door
Is your peaceful heavenly smile
I carved it on my door
To lock the sorrows inside.
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An insightful piece of poetry written from the conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, madam.
Wonderful and inspiring Beautiful and blooming Skilful creation. My congrats... ADD MY TEN PLUS
wonderful expression - Through the spectacles on your nose Don't speck on my rose// yeah -its not possible to share our feelings with everybody
Sometimes, it becomes impossible when words fail before the strong rush in the mind.
Your note says the truth...but whatever you have expressed here carries a complete wholesomeness of love...a splendid work....100
A Compelling and captivation composition! Well done!
I plead you, not to ask for the key, As I missed it on a thespian escape! The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific....sparkling expression! It's my pleasure reading it again and again!
The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific. -Fascinating..I enjoyed your poem
your peaceful heavenly smile To lock the sorrows inside. I carved it on the door of my heart. A treasure to the sanctum of my soul! very nice poem very beautiful poetica expressions of inner feelings..sad memories, desire to be one with the joy itself. but..... thankyou for this beautiful poem.. liked it very much dear poetess. tony
your peaceful heavenly smile To lock the sorrows inside. I carved it on the door of my heart. A treasure to the sanctum of my soul! very beautiful poetica expressions of inner feelings..sad memories, desire to be one with the joy itself. but..... thankyou for this beautiful poem.. liked it very much dear poetess. tony
when we write from the heart, it may fly beyond the soul to poem As I missed it on a thespian escape! The scuttle on my head is full of rose From the garden of Scylla of the Pacific.
Keeping sorrows inside in locked condition is wise definitely. Spectacular sight is amazing definitely. Very amazingly drafted this poem is.10
I do agree with Rajendran ji! The poem keeps communicating, and its meaning is never exhausted!
I don't claim I understood your poem. Yet, I am left with a very wonderful feel. That I think is the mark of good poetry. Thanks. (10)
Thank you Sir.These lines are the expression of a personal experience of my life.
A poetic magic.. fascinating