I searched for many treasures that reminded me of you
Your precious heart of gold and your radiant smile too
Saw the grace of your steps as you strolled into a room
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This is a wonderfully written poem expressing true love so perfectly. Put together so finely, and straight from the heart. I enjoyed this poem so much!
awesome sharp shoot worth reading and enjoying thank you
Nicely written.. i read it many times.. its awesome.. longing me... thanks Patricia..
Memories so wonderfully stored in the treasure chest. You recalled them beautifully. Thank you.
The longing for someone you care and love so much! Hope that the treasure, waiting at your threshold reach your presence at the earliest! Passionate expression of feelings, powerful and strong! Enjoyed! !
fantastic poem, i enjoyed it, so nice a poem it is that i read it many times, thanks for sharing...
Like your 'precious jewel waiting ever at the threshold to the door', this poem itself will stand the test of time as a treasure for the readers. It is so wonderfully worded, coming straight from the heart, it's really amazing! It deserves 10/10. I enjoy reading your poems. May your pen or keyboard continue to produce such jewels as this for a long time to come!