Wednesday, June 20, 2007

A Trauma Released Comments

Rating: 5.0

The eyes were drained
The heart was bleeding
His ears had withered
From all the screaming
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Daniel Richards
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Fay Slimm 19 September 2008

How utterly traumatic your verse is as it portrays trauma. You have surely achieved what you wanted in this Daniel, a reader who feels horrified at the suffering undergone. A ten for the drama in the telling.

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