Monday, February 29, 2016

A Translation Of ' Premer Feriola': Pyaar Ka Feriola (In Hindi) Comments

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Pyaar ka feriola main
Dil me bas meri bhari hai mohabaat

Banna chahte ho jo saathi mere
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Souren Mondal
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Akhtar Jawad 03 March 2016

A beautiful translation of a lovely Baegali poem, now I understood the original poem completely.

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Rajnish Manga 29 February 2016

Sur milao mere suron se Ga raha hoon main pyaar ke geet nafraat.....Aj Shiv ki tarah pi jayenge hum bas pyaar ho tumhare aur mere dil mere dil mein har roj... Taking cue from the 'feriola' ('feri wala' in Hindi) , you have done extremely well by retailing the essence of love between man and man and then replacing hatred with more love. Thanks.

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Souren Mondal 29 February 2016

Thank you Rajnish ji.. A word of approval from my fellow writers, who are senior to me, mean a world of good to me.. The works of people like you inspire me to become better.. Thank you a lot for inspiring us, and blessing us with your poetry and commentaries.. It means a lot to young writers like us..

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M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

Yes you are right, these Feriwala Bartanwala, Kapdawala and road side hawkers live their lives under extreme poverty, a tree which nobody likes......Ye bus sapne bechte hain, sapne dekhte hain....... Bahut khoob....10+++

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Souren Mondal 02 March 2016

Thank you Asim.. For both reading the poem, and helping me correct the mistakes: -) It means a lot to me...

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