Friday, March 20, 2009

A Tranquil Water Wheel Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beauty of a water wheel
Amongst lilies in a pond
How sweet and how tranquil with
Green trees and meadow beyond
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Marilyn Lott
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Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2009

Lovely imageries Marilyn...the opening stanza was the most i liked...perfect in rhythm and in its construction...thanks...10

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Thad Wilk 23 March 2009

Hi Marilyn! ! A lovely poem and the imagery you have presented of this park is so fine! The finishing touch is this water wheel; it makes this picture divine! ! Way to go! *10*! Friend Thad

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Susan Bagley 20 March 2009

Wish I was there with you Marilyn, this is lovely, As always. Susan

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Marilyn Lott

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