Saturday, January 8, 2022

A Tranquil Scene Comments

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The Sun rose high, in the morning sky,
It shone in all its glory,
Drying up the morning dew,
Such beauty there before me.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2022

For this was his, own special spot..........the focus!

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

The nature‘s reverie, its reservoir of gaiety are captured so beautifully, that I got carried away by the rhyme and rhythm of the poem, and its flow of words. As if I were thrown into a cool stream in the hot swealtering summer

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Jayne Davies 10 January 2022

Thank you. So glad you liked it.

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Ruta Mohapatra 09 January 2022

Such a beautiful image, Jayne! I live nature, robins and squirrels have a special place in my heart. Nice to see them appear in your poem!

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Jayne Davies 09 January 2022

Thank you Ruta. So pleased you liked it x

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David Wood 08 January 2022

This is a really delightful poem with good images that you feel you are there too.

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Jayne Davies 08 January 2022

Thank you David. It's a place that I stay on the other side of the Brecon Beacons. It's so beautiful and peaceful.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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