Tuesday, March 7, 2006

A Tranquil Moment Comments

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Standing near a window gazing at the waking sun,
I envision a place where the land meets the sea.
My thoughts disintegrating like raindrops after a shower,
It's just the ocean and sand beckoning me.
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Joseph T. Renaldi
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Ruby Root 01 August 2006

This is a beautiful poem Joseph, You have used a lot of great imagery and you can really feel this poem. It almost a painting. Excellent poem. Take care.

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Linda Ori 02 April 2006

Wonderful! I can just feel the sun and the sand as you describe. This is the ideal getaway destination. Thanks for the vacation! Linda

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Jose Saca 07 March 2006

Beautiful. The equivalent of a vacation.

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Joseph T. Renaldi

Joseph T. Renaldi

Frackville, Pennsylvania
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