A Train Of Stress Comments
The rats’ adept in a rat race
Buy the tickets from a shrink,
And board a train of mental stress,
Hurriedly in a wink.
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Undo overdo unlearn relearn …is the bottom line of this poem…again Maestro-Master-Stroke… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK PS Sir clicked as my favorite poem… n
Thoughts provoking splendid symbolic poem! My 10 with pleasure for this luminous composition.
Awesome poem! You know sometimes we just get into a habit of rushing toward, what we think is success, and forget to enjoy life in the moment! ! ! I especially like the part where you say, ' some wise ones know as crack pots.' Great poem! ! !
Great wisdom! That's a nice piece of work.Thank you for sharing it with us.Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.
The language is a little strange, but the ideas are interesting.
The language is a little strange, but the ideas are interesting.
The language is a little strange, but the ideas are interesting.
so easy, the words come to you, so hsrd for us not to understand. strees in todays world, has proven to be our quickest killer and we let it. thanx
An awesome poem that flows excellently like the 'Night Mail' by W. H. Auden CP
Wonderful.. a life's train of stress....great thought.. great write..excellent10+++++
excellent thoughts...very dignified...striking.... flowing with depth 10++++
an excellent and an interesting writting, a poem with a different taste from a dr in psychology who look in the depth of all in his unique way, , enjoyed the reading
Beautiful. The way you've put it in a metaphoric tone is good. Nice piece.
From : Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To : Dr Hitesh Sheth Date Time : 4/16/2009 11: 56: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: A Train of Stress Oh dear, you paint a very accurate and disturbing picture of our modern lives! We can only hope that reading your poem will encourage pople to get off the train! Mary
We all are part of this rat race which is a dilemma of modern life. A wonderful poem Dr. Sheth, another outcome of your wisdom........10/10. Regards Naseer
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#relatable, am i right?