Monday, November 24, 2008

A Train Journey Comments

Rating: 0.0

Then our world moved away slowly under our feet;
A barebacked child mopped the floor under our seats
A fifty -paise coin glistened in his hungry eyes
Like the broken sun found in the muddy puddle
...
Read full text

Jagannath rao Adukuri
COMMENTS
Indira Renganathan 06 February 2009

A fifty -paise coin glistened in his hungry eyes Like the broken sun found in the muddy puddle...meaningful metaphor...short but a great write

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success