Wednesday, August 27, 2014

A Tragic Fairy Tale Comments

Rating: 4.8

The world to her was a fairy tale
Till the moment she came across
That Dark Day.
The Sun shone;
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Pankti Vadalia
COMMENTS
Meena Nair 29 May 2018

Nice once. All should react to this act of persons by tooth and nail.

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Kruti Shah 29 May 2018

This poem is well narrated, I hope this reaches to all, so as to stop horrendous act of molestation and battle that victim and family faces. I hope this poem is translated in as many languages as it can, so that each and every line of this poem reach as many people it can. This will be best step to stop horrendous act of molestation. My best wishes to you...

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Pankti Vadalia 29 May 2018

well written and good to read, poems with expression

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Khairul Ahsan 31 October 2017

'The men didn't actually snatch her cloth. They snatched the 'Girl' inside her' - heart wrenching lines from a 17 year old girl. You have vividly depicted the horrendous act of molestation and the unbearable emotions of the victim.. I hope your readers hear loud and clear the last four lines of your poem.

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Fog Runner 25 June 2016

There is a place prepared for all men who cruelly abuse women. The rapists all go there when they die, and the punishment they justifiably experience once arriving there will be both terrifying and endless.

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2014

A horrendous narrative poem, well articulated, written with insight to hammer home the point. It's horrible what rape victims go through in the hands of the perpetrators of such abominable crimes. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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