Thursday, December 28, 2006

A Tragedy In Two Acts.....The Slow Death Of A Marriage Comments

Rating: 5.0

ACT I

It was not your presence,
rather its absence
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John Tansey
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Bill Thomas 16 January 2009

Excellent, John - very well observed & presented. You have the knack of being able to convey far more than the words you use should do. Thank you.

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John, another brilliant Geminian poet! ! ! Welcome aboard. I am digging your work.

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Patricia Gale 28 December 2006

I believe you have reviewed the play well with your words.Same it sometimes happens exactly as you described.

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Goldy Locks 28 December 2006

i like the description/development. slight slant to the sea. think it needed more, personally. another act, perchance; bulk up the body. keep on SusxGLx

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