A Tragedy In Two Acts.....The Slow Death Of A Marriage Comments

Excellent, John - very well observed & presented. You have the knack of being able to convey far more than the words you use should do. Thank you.

John, another brilliant Geminian poet! ! ! Welcome aboard. I am digging your work.

I believe you have reviewed the play well with your words.Same it sometimes happens exactly as you described.

i like the description/development. slight slant to the sea. think it needed more, personally. another act, perchance; bulk up the body. keep on SusxGLx