Saturday, August 1, 2009

A Toy Comments

Rating: 2.1

Alluring, self-absorbed
Perfidious, conceited
Deprived of candour
An insignificant drop
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Ejaz Khan
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Ritty Patnaik 21 March 2010

a perfect poem ejaz! man as a micrcosm seems almost insignificant in the macrocosm.surely he has a identity amongst all beings, and god holds the strings individually, pushing, pulling and propelling, as puppets or you can say kites.dancing to his tune.as usual a wise write from you........best wishes ritty

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2009

symbolic...beautifully worded to convey the concept within...thanks...10

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Steven S 06 August 2009

I say 'without' but others will differ.

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. . 01 August 2009

Images are vivid here Ejaz. A humbling experience this write!

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Rakesh Bedi 01 August 2009

The whole poem is flawless, with a decent flow, sir!

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 01 August 2009

Out there in realm of deceit He’s nothing But a puppet on a string Just a toy... Really sir we are all nothing but puppet in the hand of almighty....

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