Thursday, August 2, 2012

A Toy Story Comments

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Sometimes I feel like I am just a toy
Being played by people who are not a child

They pick me up and play when they are in mood
They just ignore me when I am of no use
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Han Min Ohn
sometimes hero
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 August 2012

The work has smooth, fluxive structural movement...Your employment of couplet stanzaic construction works well here...Well Done, Han! ~FjR~

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