Tuesday, October 4, 2011

A Toy For Demons Comments

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A slave to demons,
they crack the whip,
They take what little life I have away from me,
They do as they please... With whom ever they need...
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Thoughts Of A Poet 20 October 2012

this poem is so scary to even read, what are you doing right now, how did you come up with such a frightening poem as the one that i'm reading right now?

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Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

'just lie my sword upon the ground, lower my shield, let one final strike, take the life I do not own, ' You have become Junior Walt Whitman for poet for his death and nature poems. I like the power of you that exploded like nuclear bomb.. R a glossing fire ball! How can u store that much energy young poetess!

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Jacqui Broad 11 October 2011

And so the ageless battle between good and evil, continues. This is powerful writing that I want to pick up my sword and fight right beside you. Kill all those damned souls and demons...

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Sumanta Roy 11 October 2011

The poem is nice and good

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