A Tough Love Comments

I couldn't help but thinking of someone I know while reading this. Good job.

well that hits the nail on the head.

Ash, That's a really sweet, really sad poem girlfriend. You're good at writing out your thoughts...I remember when you'd throw them all at me in notes in 8th and 9th grades! hehehe...ancient history I know. Love ya girl, see ya in a little bit.

Wow babe. You pretty much just summed up your life for the last three months into about 20 lines. This poem is great! I LOVE YOU!

this poem is great.. i really like the style and flow of the poem. i would really like to know what you think of my poems

You use some very powerful images, Ashley. This poem allows you to feel bad for the narrator and share her frustration at being apart from the one she loves. Nice job.