A Total Aspect Comments

Deep words and an excellent read......thank you.........10+

I am deeply moved by this piece. shan

Very simple and well written. Nice poem

It is true that the total aspect is taken into account to be present in the present. In a few words, you have brought out this total aspect.

Good concise summary of what it means to be really present - I like this one and a 10 from Fay

To be present in the present in the real sense is well revealed in this piece. Nice!

Nice nice work great poem nice words also.. Krista

Mind, body and spirit are separated only by our need to use language to describe them. True presence includes all that is human. A perfect description of one in being.

Profound thought. To be present in the present is to array surroundings, mind and soul in One line. CP

A poem written with some depth...one's personality must be totally whole and healthy in all aspects to became worthy and live a meaningful life.......10

Deep, thought provoking philosophy! I have to cogitate more on this one...............>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Great thoughts in this one.....Very interesting to read...good job Sam