A Torrid Summer-Day (Tanka) Comments

know this well enough, wonderfully depicted in superb poetry

We hear summer's murmur with murmur of Cicadas. This is really very amazing poem wisely drafted and shared. Process of sweating goes on and wind bring cold effect. Sumner poem is amazing really...10

The climate of the region is hot and dry. A large homopterous insect with long transparent wings murmurs still here in calmness with cold drinks and condensation is observed. An amazing Tanka you have drafted seems to be natural in summer and humorous in life's expression. This is brilliant and excellent....10