Tuesday, January 1, 2008

A Tornado Warning Has Been Issued...(Too Late I Might Add!) Comments

Rating: 4.3

Death hides behind the sable clouds
that sweep over the crimson skies.
The mortal beings observe in awe
as the gale presents them with their
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Michael Fischer
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Adnana Saric 29 August 2008

a serious message indeed, you have a point in this piece, well done!

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Brian Hinckley 10 July 2008

We don't listen, completely agreed. When we cry to the sky in lament, we wonder why we aren't heard. Maybe we are being taught a lesson, a lesson well earned.

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There's a serious message here. A well-composed piece indeed Michael. t x

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Effie Yalena Steyn 01 January 2008

A very powerful poem, well done and keep it up! Effie.

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Shannon Wright 01 January 2008

I love it! I give it a ten, thanks!

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