Wednesday, July 4, 2012

A Toothless Knife Comments

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If you could live forever
Just to love me,
In the blink of an eye
I could live eternity.
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Patti Masterman
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Captain Cur 06 July 2012

This poem seems to twist the knife of love, which has extremely deadly teeth and then expressively disarm it. Great write.

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Eric Cockrell 04 July 2012

or a door that opens both ways! great work as always.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 July 2012

You have too many strange wishes! ! sounds.....................

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