A Toothbrush Rush Comments

Evocative to the very core, I can see why this took some time, its like a layer cake, the words express things on a multitude of different level. It only takes a toothbrush to stop the cavities of the world. So many wonderful and beautiful lines, one of my favourites Then together take more brushes and start to clean some more maybe the biggest dirt of world, own violent mind, let the clean be done kindly, by a homely toothbrush. wonderfully descriptive and imaginative, thank you so much for telling me about this one, an ingénues work.

Beautiful, let's start with one small toothbrush on ourselves and then the world. Save ourselves and the world one small stroke at a time. Then let us rinse the filth and hatred from our mouths. Loved this poem, simple but so very complex.

A really lovely piece of writing, I would love a toothbrush like that.

where did you buy that tooth brush? ? ? it can clean mind and heart, i never find it here LOL joking :) Nice message Elena, if we can clean as that it will be easy to clean our mind to remain innocent but it not really here but your poem can replace the toothbrush by sending message to mind! _Unwritten Soul

What a thought tangent.....

Your thoughts come across clear and reciprocated. Clean a world with a toothbrush, lovely thought. Read mine - Time for Another - Adeline

A powerful and well elaborated write that is very impressive and thought provoking! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC