Friday, April 3, 2009

A Tombstone In My Eye Comments

Rating: 4.9

I’ve got tombstones in my eyes
My tears they feel like gravel
I see death upon the streets
Of every road I travel
...
Read full text

Wojja Fink
COMMENTS
Angela L Burke 30 April 2009

I like this :) and it is so very true.

0 0 Reply
Rose Cook 22 April 2009

I love this one it's so beautiful, very deep and well written

0 0 Reply
William Stoneberger 19 April 2009

really nice...would make a good song...kinda has that Dylan feel to it...

0 0 Reply
Subroto Chatterjee 19 April 2009

A 'painful' beauty of a poem.....Disturbing memories and unfortunate tombstones. Keep writing my friend. Cheers. Subroto

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 14 April 2009

wonderful poem... God knows what we longing for...good concept..nice write...

0 0 Reply
Anjali Sinha 11 April 2009

wow a lovely poem yes Lord tell us what we need -10 anjali A JOY FILLED EASTER TO YOU AND CAROL lots of love anjali

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 07 April 2009

A unique title.And the contents of your poem does not dsappoint. I believe that God counts every tear that falls. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 April 2009

Blessed are those who suffers, for they shall be comforted............ The promise is given in revelation about new earth and new heaven.........It can't go in vain.........Good Write...10+++...........

0 0 Reply
Muhammad Ali 03 April 2009

very touchy lines, living art Wojja 10

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success