Thursday, February 12, 2015

A Token Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was no moon in the sky
Only the flicker of a gas flared faraway
And I could feel the premonition
Of dawn of love surfacing in the horizon
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 February 2015

Many many thanks.....Ken.....I am humbled.....

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Ken E Hall 25 February 2015

Love the maker of life well dressed and a merger of life and love that Zeus bestows...your vision in poetry wonderful...regards

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Rajesh Thankappan 19 February 2015

A beautiful poem Deepak ji where our egos meet both in contradiction and harmony.

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Rajesh Thankappan 19 February 2015

A beautiful poem Deepak ji where our egos meet both in contradiction and harmony.

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Salini Nair 15 February 2015

beautiful love poem ...like it

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Valsa George 13 February 2015

He seems to be very cool with all 'branded stuff' on his body! Two identities merged in love! Great imagination!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2015

Very nicely envisioned. Love to Zeus is love to men that is eternal. Beautiful. Thanks a lot.

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Lyn Paul 12 February 2015

Love...., love the excitement in your words. You made me smile with The Ray bans and The Levis. Just LOVE the laughter and the love. Uplifting words.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 February 2015

love is the only truth, it is here for ever. thanks.

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