A Toast Comments

i thought i may have read this when i saw the title. did i already say in previous comments that it, the title, is making my hungry. pb and jelly on toast. YUM! ! BRI :)

i just read the Bipasha poem. i didn't even (seem to) notice your great rhyming; the poem was so entrancing otherwise. :) :) bri

(cont.) ...here Then comes Death to render much less than this seems (thank 'ME, not God!) to contradict this later line: Then comes Death to render much less than this................so, in fact, i think you, Lora, agree with me. Thanks. we shall both welcome Death! ! ! have a lovely death, my friend. ha ha! bri :) to MyPoemList even just for old times' sake. bri :)

rye or whole wheat. yes, i've not read it yet, and i probably won't have time to (or at least not to comment) today; supper is ready! ! ! well, on any particular morning Fate may not 'shine' on you/me/whomever, but the next morning it may! ! ! mayn't it? ? well, i think what Death offers IS often a lot! ! ! hopefully it will be when 'my time' comes. BUT, yeah, i get your drift.........i think. (continued) ...

As always, a well composed poem with great rhyming. I agree, sometimes situations happen that are not favorable...things happen that are beyond our control...