Monday, March 30, 2009

A To Z (Human Toys Comments

Rating: 4.4

HUMAN TOYS

About a bitter truth do speak I
By God gracious tell not lie
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akram saqib
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Joseph Poewhit 12 May 2009

Human toys are SLAVES if not compensated for being a toy - PLUS OVERTIME

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 April 2009

There are many mechanical toys that are most dangerous than a human toy.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 03 April 2009

Unfortunately some treat many as if they are toys to be dismantled and mangled. Yet if we care about our toys we admire them, keep them safe and have them through the years. So quite the irony, as we are not toys and even if we were most care for their toys through the years. A deep, dark poem that should be read at one of those several summits.

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Ken E Hall 01 April 2009

Very creative poem it shows your passion in writing and with a very different angle with human toys....enjoyed this very much..well done regards uavanice1

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Eyan Desir 30 March 2009

good write little man 10

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

I don't know if i am going to qualify this as an acrostic composition, a new poetic innovation...creative write...Thanks for sharing this meaningful piece....10+++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 March 2009

Not just an experimental poem, its very meaningful, thought evoking reality and much needed in this time of strife and conflict. Well done, Akram.......10/10. There is no need of the foot note. What you have explained in the footnote is apparent. Best Wishes Naseer

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nice acrostic piece.. very good.

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Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 30 March 2009

wow your poem shows a lot and i love it

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