Thursday, March 15, 2007

A Title Would Ruin The Ending Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smoke eats the air
Failure is beeping in the distance
My heart skips a beat
Curses fill the ears of the walls
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Cheyenne Ashley
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JoAnn McGrath 15 March 2007

It made me smile The title would give away the ending It was so eloquently written that I didn't expect the cookies demise Good one!

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Lee Degnan 15 March 2007

OH NO! ! ! The saddest of all poems.... I loved reading this..., too bad dessert had to see such a horrible end lol Lee

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Cheyenne Ashley

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