Sunday, July 22, 2012

A Timely Rhyme Comments

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When last I heard the town clock chime
There came to me this thought for rhyme;
About that stupid problem- time,
Now heavy on our hands.
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Joseph Anderson
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John Brown 19 September 2012

A fantastic poem Joseph - I loved it.

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Captain Cur 30 July 2012

I like the gain one hour each day part, until our days become endless. Now would that be a good thing? Very clever and humorous write Joe, I enjoyed this very much.

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Heather Wilson 23 July 2012

Such a clever amusing write Sir, My time talk has a silly stink.. no way, as always, a fantastic poem.

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Walterrean Salley 22 July 2012

A brilliant write. Love the flow. I’ve read it twice. Time is a major issue on the minds of many. This is a good conversational piece.

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King Big Head 22 July 2012

A really fantastic poem, really enjoyed reading it.

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

Just think how simple life would be without clocks - or perhaps chaotic. Lighthearted and amusing write, very well penned Joe.

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