Those things i did effortlessly,
those smiles i gave without recourse,
those moments of exfoliating warmth,
rolled back in time, like a thunderbolt
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A deeply, introspective poem. The first stanza bares the emotive strain of the poem eloquently. A suggestion, It all now seemed prescient would sound better than all seemed of essence. A splendid poem. Enjoyed it very much!
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry and hope to read more
A rich and refreshing lake of love and life. Well done my friend!
Bolanle, this is a beautiful well.