Wednesday, October 17, 2012

A Timely Ode Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those things i did effortlessly,
those smiles i gave without recourse,
those moments of exfoliating warmth,
rolled back in time, like a thunderbolt
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Bolami lawal
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Folashade Samuel 03 March 2019

Bolanle, this is a beautiful well.

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Stephen Parker 08 May 2013

A deeply, introspective poem. The first stanza bares the emotive strain of the poem eloquently. A suggestion, It all now seemed prescient would sound better than all seemed of essence. A splendid poem. Enjoyed it very much!

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Asif Andalib 02 November 2012

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry and hope to read more

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A rich and refreshing lake of love and life. Well done my friend!

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