A Time Without You Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Time Without You

Rating: 5.0


How sad it seems now you are gone,
But memories are mine to keep,
You would want me to move on,
Not to sit around and weep,
You gave me strength each passing day,
And I know you're always there,
If you could speak I know you'd say,
Be strong my love for I still care.
So on I go without you now,
I always knew the time would come,
I have sweet memories anyhow,
Of you my precious Dad and Mum.



Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 11 June 2022

A lovely tribute to parents written with love and style both. Love the rhyme and natural flow and tone of the poem.5 stars!

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Sweet memorial. Good poem. Top score

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Anjandev Roy 12 June 2022

Significant piece.....thank u....

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Anjandev Roy 12 June 2022

And I know you are always there.....

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Thanks for your lovely comments. I'm so greatful.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 June 2022

A heart wrenching, inspirational and motivational tribute poem to parents that you had truly loved. Top marks!

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Thank you so much Richard. I'm greatful for your kind comments.

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 June 2022

Many thanks to you all for your lovely comments. It means a lot. x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 June 2022

once again you have got me Bravo!

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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