*a Time Traveller From Future Years! Comments

nostalgic write...time travel..an interesting theme

the poem is beautiful..the footnotes speaks truth..the entire work is very nice..grace

Congrats, Raj ji. Quite imaginative.

Very charming. I love the heart warming imagery. It must have comforted you to write this.10/10 for your creative imagination. Lovely... Always your friend, Sandra

Where wishes were horses and you could take a ride, And you could meet your loved ones from the past, - as if they were all alive! ....liked your imagination...liked your thought process......Brishti....

You could see there your old grandmother knitting away, And your grandfather nodding beside her during the day! You could speak to them gently and they would reply, You could even hear grandmother telling you to drink your milk, - To be brave, and not feel shy! You could see your dead relatives and your long lost friends, thats extra great, i loved it, it sort of bring memories back to ones mind so many words need to be said, so many tears need to be cried, yes i do need those i lost. thanks dear poet friend for sharing this poem. God bless you.

this is an amazing composition. nobody in all honesty can say that if only one could turn the clock back, one would not do things differently. through endearing, familiar images, Raj you made me nostalgic and also sad. who wants to travel back in time or in future- life is here and now, give your best to your loved ones. you excel in both serious as well what you like to call writing in lighter vein. pleasure to read your work. 10++ Mamta

Excellent composition with imagination, love it.

wow lovely imagination... the last lines are terribly wonderful...