Sunday, May 8, 2022

A Time To Reflect Comments

Rating: 5.0

The surrounding nature,
Looked stunning in the daytime sun,
As I walked along,
It was a time to reflect on those things that I've done,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 May 2022

How did I miss this one? I can't explain the disappointment of not reading it Bravo!

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Thank you so much LeeAnn x I really appreciate your comments x

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2022

May I say about a little minus point? Your line: 'For your with me today' is wrong in a grammar way, it must be 'For you're with me today'. I am sorry but I had to tell you about this grammar mistake.

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Thank you Sylvia x And thanks for pointing that out. Much appreciated x

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You're most welcome, dear Jayne.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2022

Aptly worded, beautiful song about your great love.5 Stars full score. I have enjoyed tremendously! This precious love cherished

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Nabakishore Dash 09 May 2022

Nice reflection of lovely days.Wonderful.

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Thanks for your comment x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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