A Time To Reflect Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Time To Reflect

Rating: 5.0


The surrounding nature,
Looked stunning in the daytime sun,
As I walked along,
It was a time to reflect on those things that I've done,
On days like this,
When we walked together,
I so loved being with you,
Whatever the weather,
And the birds sang on,
Such a beautiful sound,
Wild flowers grew all around,
A constant reminder of those summers with you,
Such love,
Felt at that moment,
There amongst the fresh morning dew,
And the sky so blue,
Above me so fine,
I so loved these days in this valley of mine,
For you're with me today,
And your love will live on,
In the sun,
In the sky,
In the birds gentle song.



Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 May 2022

How did I miss this one? I can't explain the disappointment of not reading it Bravo!

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Thank you so much LeeAnn x I really appreciate your comments x

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2022

May I say about a little minus point? Your line: 'For your with me today' is wrong in a grammar way, it must be 'For you're with me today'. I am sorry but I had to tell you about this grammar mistake.

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You're most welcome, dear Jayne.

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Thank you Sylvia x And thanks for pointing that out. Much appreciated x

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2022

Aptly worded, beautiful song about your great love.5 Stars full score. I have enjoyed tremendously! This precious love cherished

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Nabakishore Dash 09 May 2022

Nice reflection of lovely days.Wonderful.

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Jayne Davies 16 May 2022

Thanks for your comment x

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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