A Time To Bury Sorrow Comments
A time for you and a time for me,
to be whatever, we choose to be;
to set our sights, to reach the peak,
to realize goals, we truly seek.
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Excellent write! Shades of 'Ecclesiastes' I must say, but better put in a modern perspective, and making it relevant to our times. The repetition style is remarkable and the flow/texture of the whole poem is smooth and not 'preachy'. I like your word choice and the meaningful message, and so have added this to my other favorite poems. Bravo David! ! ! ! ! 10++++
After reading this poem, I feel a huge separation towards the verses, and perhaps in the mind of the character. I guess its background must be Blue! The repeated structure, intentionally suitable I think! Best wishes,
: D....this poem makes me smile.......i think we all need some time to do those things......i know i could......very nicely done......smooth and relaxing 10++
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7/25/2025 8:48:06 PM # 1.0.0
in everything there is a season and in every purpose there is a time under heaven... nice write here... full of wisdom...