Tuesday, October 2, 2007

A Time To Be Thankful Comments

Rating: 3.9

Life is hard, it always has been
And we struggle with so many things
We feel over-whelmed sometimes
For what our daily life brings
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Marilyn Lott
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Pamela Lutwyche 23 August 2020

Yes, you have this right, a beautiful way of puting it into a poem. We can all get exhausted, but we do need to be thankful for what we have. Lovely poem.

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Sarah Persson 02 May 2016

I think a lot of people can relate to this poem Marilyn, I certainly do. Perhaps a time out each day to be thankful would help break the mould. Lovely poem

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Ranjit Ravindran 29 September 2009

'So busy keeping a roof over-head And keeping the children fed Unfulfilled at the end of the day And fall exhausted into our beds' WoW... The fate of the entire human race has been squeezed into this verse. Its high time we extract time for being thankful for everything we are blessed with. Beautiful message.. A sweet 10.

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Lucianne Fasolo 02 October 2007

I liked this. Good job, :)

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